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[PDF] Tumbleweeds | by ↠ Louis Psaltiras
485 Louis Psaltiras

Four p.m. Plumber: Erotica for Couples
In this bonus story for Morning, Noon and Night
I have really gotta start being selective about these random kindle freebies I seem to download I mean, sometimes they do turn out to be pleasant surprises, but odds are heavily against it This one is a shining example of a prototypical kindle freebie it has a decent description, even a decent cover, but then the execution is just dramatically lackluster And it s tough, because the author has obviously tried, but it just screams jejune, really amateurish writing that alternates between overdone [...]
I will be totally honest with you, I am at a complete loss how to explain this story Definitely, science fiction because aliens are involved The one problem I had is that it is so totally unbelievable that I couldn t take it seriously Even when I know it s sci fi, a complete fantasy, I wanted to think what would I do if this happened How would I react When the story is so ridiculous that you can t even understand half of what is going on, I have a hard time getting through it.I had a hard time w [...]
Incredibly poorly editedMisspellings, constant run on sentences, stilted dialogue, time jumping all over the place Good grief It has a good idea and plot, but needs SO MUCH WORK.
Story Quite a unique look at first contact Gives way to a possible expansion of this authors multiverse.Language Moderate Nothing the kids won t hear on television, and a lot less these days.Notes Needed another edit for grammar, sentence structure, and a few things that, as an American retired lecturer in literature, I would point out as needs a bit of tightening in some areas.Overall Quite a good book I find myself looking forward to the authors next publication.
Weird scientific pronouncements that make no sense for characters or scenes strange fascination of characters in covering up pivotal events to protect jobs reputations Plus the myriad of editing issues, inconsistency, unlikely scenarios, etc already pointed out in other reviews A nugget of an interesting idea fleshed out without structure and poorly edited If the editing wasn t so poor, I would ve guessed that the book was written by AI.
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