No Choice is a Kindle NO CHOICE STARS This is my first review of this book but it s a reread I read this book before I started reviewing and I had given it stars I ho
No Choice is a Kindle 4.25 NO CHOICE STARS This is my first review of this book but it's a reread. I read this book before I started reviewing and I had given it 5 stars. I honestly can't do this after my reread. I had too many small issues with the book to do this. Now the story it's about an experienced businessman named Cameron and a young university graduate named Nathalie. Cam sees Nat from across the student union and falls hard for her. Obsessed is more the word here he tells her as soon as they meet:"I’m leaving to go back to Seattle in the morning, but as far as I’m concerned, you and I are together.” I got that she would be shocked by my words, but she’d get over it in time. I’d given her two days too many already."Wow, a whole two days he was clearly taking his time here...NOT!Yeah so he was clearly GONE FOR HER.Now Nathalie was shocked by his declaration but also she was extremely attracted to Cam. To her, he seemed to be a force of nature that no one could stop! She asked him:“So I’ve got no choice?” And he answers "No. No choice. You’re mine.”So he seemed to have it all planned out for them in two months time.They will be together after she graduates from University. He will clear up his work schedule so that they can spend time together and start on their future.Clearly he is planing for them to get married, move in together and have a family. THE WHOLE HEA HERE!However, it's never that simple now is it!? And honestly the book would have bored me here without all the drama. It made the book more enjoyable and exciting. We have two obsessed other women, a major misunderstanding, a crazy stalker or two, and the parents from HELL! So will they overcome all these obstacles? I am afraid you have toGenerally, I enjoyed this book and the sex scenes were really HOT baby making scenes. It was a great story that had enough drama and romance to keep me interested. It was an engaging book but it was not perfect. It has a few minor editing issues here that I had overlooked the first time I read it. These are minor for me as it didn't interfere with my comprehension.However, I felt it needed to be mentioned. One example: the book writes "causal lay" instead of "casual lay."Along with the usual mistakes like...Now I don't claim to be perfect myself here but this is a published book so, I expect more. This was a minor issue here and it's the only reason why I could not give it a 5 stars that I had originally gave it. The story by itself deserves a 5 star! OVERALL I LOVED IT! Safety: no cheating (but the heroine does kiss her ex while they are broken up and wanted to have sex with him) some drama, some pushing from the heroine, no condoms (never mentioned the past use either). Heroine is a virgin and hero is experienced.. Natalie Cromwell is an unassuming, and intelligent beauty and soon to be college grad Cameron James is a hot, hardworking, and wealthy businessman Their lives crossed paths purely by chance Visiting his sister in school, Cam sees Nat and instantly realizes that she s the one Natalie on the other hand is very interested, but skeptical Time and distance tear apart the Natalie Cromwell is an unassuming, and intelligent beauty and soon to be college grad Cameron James is a hot, hardworking, and wealthy businessman Their lives crossed paths purely by chance Visiting his sister in school, Cam sees Nat and instantly realizes that she s the one Natalie on the other hand is very interested, but skeptical Time and distance tear apart their relationship, just as she believed it would, but she didn t realize that Cam wouldn t give up Excerpt It still galled me that she was with someone else I wondered if they d been together before the party and were just coming out again as a couple Either way, it really didn t matter she was mine Nobody was going to take her from me Tonight, she d have the ring to prove it I d just picked it up that afternoon of the accident It was a four carat solitaire diamond with a platinum band When you looked at the ring, it looked like a normal huge rock, but it was the inscription that mattered No choice, you re stuck with me.. Good Book No Choice Let me preface my review by saying that if you really enjoy OTT alpha males who see a woman & immediately classify her asthe oneto bed, wed, and breed for life based on nothing more thanone look -and- then proceeds to just walk up to her and inform her of her new role and place in life as his,then you will fing love this book. Their Insta Love & Flat Soap Opera Isn't My Cup'aFor me, I don't particularly mind Insta-love like the aboveIFit's also either surrounded by grounding normalcy scenes afterward or forms in the midst of some kind of high octane emotional situation. This provided neither of the above and therefore came across as silly bullshit vs endearing for me. It came across as a soap opera style with a very flat delivery. The characters are stick figures in the book; by 27%, I can tell you she's a student who has f'd up parents and he's a business man that says "fuck" a lot. Otherwise, I can't tell you a single personal quality about either, and that's a huge problem for me as a reader. If I don't get to the know the character, I can't connect... And if I don't connect, IDGAF about their plights and relationship. I'll Kill YouI also have a huge problem with the MMC telling the FMC this: "If you ever let another man put his hands on what's mine, I'llkill you."^ What's worse is that this is coming from a man that's spent ONLY a few hours actually with her and a few weeks on the phone with her. So, that is said literally the second time the characters interact. Wow~ EditorBook also needs an editor to clean up the typos.DNFI gave it 30% to hook me, warm up, develop, make me GAF in any way, and it just never managed to give me anything of interest.